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She clothes herself in poetry,
seals her skin within the verse.

Each line becomes another garment
that conceals her fixed form's curvature,
but peels away when read.

Last night I dissected a stanza,
clamped it tight between my teeth
and tugged it down her legs.

Her body breathes warm and sweet,
speckled red like a summer strawberry field.

I sucked the juice from her lines and
spit the punctuation like seeds.

My lips mouthed the shape of her words
as my skin grew more sticky with
every splash of imagery dripping down my chin.

I peeled apart her soft pages
with sticky, pink fingertips that left them
clinging to my skin.

A single flawless line remained
between the cloak of poetry, her and me,
so we spoke the words in unison,
revealing everything and setting her verse free.
NaPoWriMo - Day 18

I've had this idea in my head all day, and after NaPo, I will certainly revisit this concept.

EDIT:
I was thrilled to wake up this morning and find that this received a Daily Deviation. I wanted to offer a huge thanks to =Ireal70 for suggesting it and ^thorns for selecting it. Also wanted to say thank you to all the amazing people on this site who have supported me and my work. I've learned a lot, met a lot of great people and look forward to seeing how my work will continue to evolve.
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Given 2012-06-12
Undressing Poetry by =dreamsinstatic ( Suggested by Kaoyux and Featured by thorns )
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iamPoetry Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is grand!
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:iconlivvywivvylove:
livvywivvylove Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi, hon!

I used the title of this beautiful poem in my own Title Poem for #TheTitlePage here:


Thank you so much! :heart:
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013
Thank you so much, that's awesome.
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:icontwilightpoetess:
TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconpickseedust:
Pickseedust Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
sexy
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconpankhurishubnam:
pankhurishubnam Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is such an amazing and beautiful poem!! Every line is so unique and expressive <3 :claps:
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:icontravelgirlxx:
travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2012
YES. Great job.
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012
:D
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:iconredemptiarebourne:
RedemptiaRebourne Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
AWESOME!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thanks!
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:iconelaine-moon:
Elaine-Moon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really cool!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thanks!
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:iconmissdelayingit:
Missdelayingit Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! This is really great! Awesome idea and imagery. Two thumbs up for you :)
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thank you :D
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:iconakashi-kun:
akashi-kun Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
wow. simply amazing dude.
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconpennywish:
pennywish Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012
Wonderful sensual and erotic poetry
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:iconcarmenveloso:
CarmenVeloso Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You've conquered me by the first line!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012
:D
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:iconcarmenveloso:
CarmenVeloso Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:hug:
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:icondani-the-naiad:
Dani-the-Naiad Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
WOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!! Congrats on the DD! :clap: Well deserved!!!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
Thank you!
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:icondani-the-naiad:
Dani-the-Naiad Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconshiftercat:
shiftercat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2012
Unf.
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:iconminoana:
minoana Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist
This is AMAZING. Well and gorgeously done!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2012
Thank you so much!
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:iconcristinewakesuphappy:
cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
congratulations. one of my favorite poems receiving a DD - :trophy:
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2012
Thank you so much!
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:iconcristinewakesuphappy:
cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome.
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:iconaichobitz:
Aichobitz Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012  Student Writer
... Kinky.
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
=P
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional Writer
Ooh this is brilliant! So happy it got a DD!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2012
Thank you :)
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:iconladyofgaerdon:
LadyofGaerdon Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Professional Writer
You're very welcome. :)
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:iconbear48:
bear48 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional
nice job
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconzireael07:
Zireael07 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love the imagery. Awesome!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
Thanks so much!
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:iconsolaric:
solaric Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Professional Writer
What I love about this poem is how it could equally be applied to a woman and to a book of poems. Some of the best poems in my opinion are those that can be interpreted from several different view points. It really enhances the meaning, since all the possible interpretations complement each other.
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
I'm not a big fan of there being only one right way to read something. I try, and enjoy, writing things in a way where it's open to multiple takes and interpretations. I like the idea of someone reading my work and getting a completely different impression than the person next to them.
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solaric Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Professional Writer
I admire your talent for it - it's not something I've really tried yet, but your poem is quite inspiring!
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
I'd love to see you do some work with it :)
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kayceethe166 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is quite possibly one of the most delicious things i have read in a long while. i'm very glad you got a daily dev for this, because otherwise, i would have missed out completely.
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
I'm extremely glad you enjoyed reading it.
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Razor13 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
NaPoWriMo? o.o Please share?

Lovely piece. Very touching, very open, and very true in a sense.
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:icondreamsinstatic:
dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012
NaPoWriMo is National Poetry Writing Month. For the month of April you write a poem a day.

Thank you.
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Razor13 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ah. I've known April is National Poetry Month, but I hadn't heard of NaPoWriMo as some sort of challenge.
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:iconremanth:
remanth Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this piece. The visualization is amazing. Great work :D
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