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I can feel you
flowing through me
Breathing in my air
Coughing out my hate
And I'm drowning
In this ocean of pain
But your fingers find me
and release the strain
I'm on fire, quench
the flame with your kiss
and soothe my soul,
set me free, release me
Cause I'm falling
Slamming hard, dropping
fast into your arms praying
That you'll catch me, hold
me close and tight don't
ease up, don't relax, just
lock me up in your heart
and lets never look back.
I shut my eyes, see your
face, the haunting still
lingers in this place, in
my body surging through
me, liquid flame melting
flesh, mold me in your
lips.  Let me drip and slide
down your thigh, across your
neck, across your heart
solidified, unified, pieces
broken now one, don't
shut down, don't push back
lets have a moment,
burn away, smolder up
into the sun...
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~Lady-Divine:iconLady-Divine: Apr 15, 2008, 7:59:44 PM
whoaa.. this is strong..:)
great usage of words...:)

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~shaenicole:iconshaenicole: May 17, 2008, 12:40:20 PM
I really like the structure of this poem. It flows so nicely.
*dreamsinstatic:icondreamsinstatic: May 17, 2008, 1:37:59 PM
Thanks so much.

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